very first meeting with supervisor

So today, I submitted a draft on what I wanted to do in this personal project. It includes my goal to achieve in this personal project, what is the product or the outcome of this project that I will do. I met my supervisor and I explain everything in the draft that I created. Since this is only a draft, I finalize my draft but after I gain feedback from my supervisor. The feedback is to be more detail on proposed project, what inspired me to do it, the steps/the tasks you will need to complete in order to achieve your final results. basically in the picture below is what i needed to improve. but at the picture below i actually already improve the proposal and send it to my supervisor via email. a good thing is she aprroves my proposal and i am ready to do my personal project.